Field guide No. 1554

At night in a motel room, a pale curtain billows in from the open window. The window glass is billowing too, rippling out of its frame like cloth.

Draft copy

Window and curtain both caught it.

At night in a motel room, a pale curtain billows in from the open window. The window glass is billowing too, rippling out of its frame like cloth.

Field noteGlass caught by the same draught as the curtain, bellying out of its frame like a sail.

Specimen
No. 1554
Kind
Possible (the golden mountain kind)
Breaks
Material
Where it doesn’t exist
a motel room at night with the window open
Nearest existing relative
a sail
Filed in Fresh slop as
Spaces

Also possible, also breaking material